All Comments on 'Night without Day'

Five stars for the overall story, it was sweet and loving yet sexy, the sex wasn't rushed, Evan was a thoughtful lover making sure to please Sasha first.

However when he took her virginity I hope you didn't mean that he broke her hymen after shoving his fingers in her she wouldn't have one to break, it's one thing to take her virginity and quite another to break the hymen.

Excellent story and a very enjoyable read thank you.

Very sweet and loving, can't wait to have that come true in two weeks:)

Not the story, it was pretty nice. I meant not letting the kids have friends.

So the baby was born 6 months after they got married, and she only had sex one month before that, meaning that at most the baby was in the womb for 7 months, so the baby was born 2 months premature at least. Or did she get pregnant 6 months later. That part needs to be cleared a bit, but other than that, great story. 9/10

Night without Day is a very sweet romance story, but it is far too short in all aspects. Given the talent of the writer, this is a disappointment. Night without Day could have been even better if it was more embellished and a good deal longer.