All Comments on 'Nightclub Ch. 01'

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lizzysteinlizzysteinover 9 years agoAuthor
This is a continuation

This is a continuation of a previous story. I should have linked to the first part in the first line, but I didn't think of it. The first part of the story is here:

Http://www.literotica.com/s/nightclub-1

Sean RenaudSean Renaudabout 9 years ago

Damn good story. My only real complaint is that I think you should have written this as one big story instead of two short ones and at a glance anybody would think that Chapter 1 was. . .you know. . .Chapter 1 not chapter 2.

visioneervisioneerabout 9 years ago

A good continuation given the setup in the first part. Very rough action handled well. I hope you continue to post.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Loved this story. Especially when she cleaned his cock with her filth on it. Nasty and dirty, but erotic and kinky.

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