by NightOwl64
The presentation was polished, grammatically correct and so on, but I didn't really enjoy the story. It may be because I don't find BSDM arousing.
This story had everything necessary to keep the reader engaged!! i will definitely be keeping an eye out for more of your work. Would love to have the entire back story of your ghost! He is wickedly delicious!!
Spooky, sexy. I really liked. I will be reading more of your submissions.
I really loved this - it had all the things about it that make a good story a great story. Thank you.