All Comments on 'Nights of Alsitor: Xanthe & Narciss Ch. 02'

First, do your research. A rabbit is not a rodent. It is a lagomorph. Second , it's taking way too long to tell the story. People lose interest when they have to wait days to read a complete story. It wouldn't be so bad if the story was paced better. But as it is... I've lost interest in following this 'saga'.

The story is set in an alternate future and your panties are getting twisted over improper mammalian taxonomy? I've chosen the pace of the story and I'm not changing it. You will not be missed.

First, if you're going to write, then you better learn to take criticism. Second, if it's set in the future, then why is the main character's name taken from Greek mythology. Last, this is an erotic site, so nobody wears panties here.

Pretty touchy for an anonymous poster. I'm sure there's plenty of stories to suit your attention span, leave this for adults seeking some character depth. Also, you know Greek mythos is, like, ancient? These have been household names for thousands of years, you really think they won't be around a thousand more?