All Comments on 'Nightstick'

Your humor and deft touch both show in this story. You have really bent the superhero mythos in this bit of magic. Another 5 stars

This is delightful! I love how much fun you had with the genre. Thanks for the chuckles and the marvelous images.

Wonderful way with words you have, Silvermouse. Thanks for a fun, sexy read. Can't wait to see what's next.

A VERY good read. Amazing story and concept. The only thing, the tiniest critique that I could possibly scrounge out after a week (okay, just after this... but still...) is that you could've stretched the whole thing into a longer story. Impatiently waiting for a sequel, for that is MUST with a story this amazing. Or maybe another story like this....as some would say, endless possibilities...

What a fantastic story! Really well done. I hope you'll write a sequel!

Also, the beginning and ending reminds me of Roger Zelazny's "The Engine at Heartspring's Center," about the Bork. Coincidence?

^ the name for your sequel. :) pun intended.

seriously, though, this was amazing. please write more!

This could easily be made into a movie, having all the required elements of self-discovery, romance, villains, questions of morality, and personal growth.

Maybe that's what the mark of a good story is - i.e. whether or not it can be made into a movie.

Ooooohhhh, that's so f*cking cheesy.

Decent story arc, though.