All Comments on 'Nilofar Pt. 01'

So glad to see you back. Cotton Candy is in my top five list so am seriously looking forward to this new series!

Fabolous. Looking forward to the next one. Though I have a question. Where did u get the Nilofar's name from ? :)

Love the story so far but please don't stop to explain things in brackets: we all know what cc is, Please breaking the story to explain things such as this is unnecessary because it only brings a stop to the flow of your writing. Otherwise this is a great read

Thanks for the love and the feedbacks. I'm not sure what your expectations might be but this story is completely different from Cotton Candy. The only similarity that you may find is the romance between the main two characters. The second part is almost ready and will be out in a week or so to be max.

Love stories that have build up and just don't rush to sex. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I knew a woman with a very similar name. She was Parsi, and it is a Persian name meaning lotus or water lily,

Yes, you're absolutely right Jackie_em about the name, it means blue water Lilly and is very common in between Persis as well as Muslims.

Been waiting for your next story and not disappointed. Hopefully we will be able to enjoy more of your work soon.

What an adorable story. I'm loving it. I love how the differnce in the characters from their physical traits, to education, and their socio-economic status is weaving into a basket of new and exciting love. And that's danke! Well, on to Pt. 02

One less star for the too long dream scene. It was sweet, but unnecessarily and distractingly long.

Nilofar ..... Sounds exotic and lovely, femme ....... And the real meaning as in translation "water lily" mmmh sweet ...... The story, again a sales girl and a lonely one ...... And again both girls with an out of average big heart ..... Nice start and im really looking forward to there this path is leading to

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