by paperchaseblue
I loved it. It is short, details are scant, which allowed me to use my imagination to picture how the two got here. Sadly, I can see the majority of people not liking this. To them I urge them to read this as a slice of life between two people in love, that the author is sharing with us. Not every story has to be about screwing and fucking.
This story is well written and needs no sequel. I love having the ability to imagine what the untold beginning and future of their relationship was and is. Thank you!
Would love to have more explaining why Dad left. Was sister home?
Such a wonderful, soft, arousing story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Well thought out, told in a way that makes me like these folks. More wit than I'm used to in these pages!