All Comments on 'Nirvana Ch. 02'

by MoonBeetle

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
My Nirvana

A beauty's second chapter MoonBeetle. I like the pace and unveiling of both Noel and Owen as people. Please keep writing. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great read!

This story has good character development and a nice, steady pace. Noel is exactly the type of person Owen needs. Crossing my fingers for a quick update for the next chapter.

baikalisanbaikalisanover 8 years ago
Liking

It all so far. Really anticipating where you'll go with these volume and their background stories.

Thanks for writing and submitting

63lsmith63lsmithalmost 8 years ago
NICE

I think this was better than the first chapter. Keep it coming.

MoonBeetleMoonBeetlealmost 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Sorry for late reply and submission. New chapters coming in the next few days!

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