All Comments on 'Nisha's Journey Ch. 01'

Can't wait for chapter 2

The next chapter will be out soon. Would love to hear more from everyone - feedback, suggestions, anything!!

I love the way you 'speak' - your use of language and how you construct sentences.

Since this is in the non-con section, I wonder who the victim/s will be - the sister, Nisha, one or both of the dudes, the stingy next door neighbour...NO, not the mom. Why did I even think that.

Please don't kill Mom. Pls don't off the mother.

Maybe after Nisha has finished raping both men, she can steal the motorcycles...okay - that's just silly. Best you write it.

Looks more than promising. You took me right to where those girls 'stay', into their world.

@evebroughtanaxthistime: Thanks for your very flattering comments. And I must say, your suggestions did get me thinking - some quite amusing ones. Well, chapter 2 is already done, and pending approval, should be out soon, and I have started working on the next part. Hope you enjoy. ^_^

hey well done...really well done..would like to see if u can incorporate some slight humiliation sex in front of family..would love to see both sisters havin sex in feont of each other , the villagers and their mom

I feel so very very sorry for these two for being in such a hopeless situation.

I hope there will be some "deus ex machina" to save them.

D.S.

I have a small requests,since your main protagonists are Indian women,make them wear very low saree below navel with skimpiest of blouses,and lots of jewellery