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All Comments on 'No, Baby. Don't Cum Yet'

by Umbrellabound

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Wonderman1Wonderman1over 7 years ago
wonderful

Love your voice and your story, very stimulating. Thanks for posting.

Sailor92694Sailor92694over 1 year ago

Nice, but through most of the story I didn’t believe the voice. She was just reading text. Also, don’t switch between describing the scene and being in the scene. Nice early effort- keep developing!

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