All Comments on 'No Best Favorite or Jealousy Ch. 03'

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redlion75redlion75almost 7 years ago

I wanna know what her dad's problem is other then boyfriend dating little girl it's not like he is a dumb jock with his grades

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Really great!

Keeping the feeling in the story and not letting it turn into a stroke story was a great decision and makes it many many times better. Thanks for your efforts and I'll be watching for the next chapter!

nreh21nreh21almost 7 years ago

Great read, more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Fantastic story

Love this story, will there be more?

TerrytheTravelerTerrytheTraveleralmost 7 years ago
Sip?

I think "huge sip" falls into the same category as "giant shrimp". Otherwise, love the story and characters. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

The dad's problem is probably the typical rich family looking down on non-rich family, or it could be that he thinks everyone else are heathens. It was mentioned earlier that Pepper's family is rich and they're very religious. Bryce's family don't show much material wealth and they aren't "Go to church every day" type of people.

So the dad is probably going "You heathen why are you dating MY daughter", or "You poor gangbanger, you're beneath our family."

Pepper's outward personality doesn't suggest her father is molesting her, which is why I concluded it's either wealth or religion.

General_OGeneral_Oalmost 7 years ago
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Great read please continue

bigdnc13bigdnc13almost 7 years ago
Another great chapter

You could follow these three into college. :)

DustyDevilDustyDevilover 6 years ago
Excellent Reading

I do hope that you will consider a sequel to this series. This has been a scorcher of a story from the start hope to read more in the not too distant future. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
WOW WOW WOW

You put 2 hot girls together with 1 great stud, all of them having character and personality. Sure, a guy cannot perform that much sexually with 2 hotties. Sure, 2 virgins do not turn overnight into insatiable sex vixens. But that's part of what made it so hot. Still it did not turn into almost nonstop sex romps (like some stories), but had a nice plot and storyline. That, combined with lots of dialog along with great writing and storytelling skills made this one of the top great short series of Literotica.

Paul in Oklahoma

BruceWoBruceWoalmost 3 years ago

There has to be another chapter please

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Now this the second wonderful story the author wrote with a cliffhanger chapter 3. Come on WokeUpOneDay lets give these series a continuation or a proper end. 5+++stars

ScottishTexanScottishTexanabout 1 year ago

I can't believe that you didn't write one more to wrap it all up! It was just beginning to get really really good now that Sarah and Pepper are bisexual lovers sharing their guy together!

I want them to all attend the same college together and support each other. Then they make themselves into a Polyamorous Triad with Bryce impregnating both of them. There's more to tell about these three. 5/5

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