All Comments on 'No Holds Barred in London'

not one of your better stories, the only reason I read this is because I know who Trish and Victoria are and I am a big fan of the WWE, but other than that I did not like the way trish was tricked and tied up by victoria and her partner

Hi

I'm sorry you didn't like it. As I explained in the foreword, I wrote this story as a sort of challenge and was a bit out of my comfort zone. That much said, I did enjoy writing it and resisted all sorts of temptations to make Trish "suffer" more than she did.

Next up (later this week) is Heather again. And this time she's the one well out of her comfort zone . . . by falling in love. It's Pt. 01 of a short series with each "part" much shorter than the ones in Heather's Busy Week. I hope you give it a read.

Whatever you thought you were doing ... or who you were doing it for ...

YOU are responsible for what you write, no one else. And no bullshit "challenge" can justify it. Brutality is not a joke ... no matter how it turns out in the end. Ends do not justify means ... ever.

Color me seriously disappointed in your judgment.