All Comments on 'No Longer a Game Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nerd alert!

The gold would be fine not even melted. Most of the magical items would have survived, it's not that easy to destroy magical items. Admittedly a little singed but not destroyed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Guardians of the Flame

Basically the beginning of this series so far.

Storm113Storm113over 6 years ago
Plagarizing!

I like it, but pls don't duplicate the rape scene. That ruined the original for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Not plagiarism

More of an homage.

PrivatejinxPrivatejinxover 6 years ago
Nerd alert?!?!

You have no clue what spell she cast and you are not the DM. DM, currently known as the writer, says it got destroyed. It's actually hard to do a lot of things in dnd but super easy if the DM allows it.

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