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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
good action sequences!

Wish that the chapters were a bit longer; I appreciate how much and how quickly you are writing, but would prefer fewer, longer, chapters? This way the flow feels somewhat disrupted.

But this is a fun story!! Thanks for writing.

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Hi all :) just a cute, introverted semi gothic girl in Savannah Ga. who enjoys reading and writing erotic fiction based on my own experiences as well as some of my own personal fantasies that can be rather taboo :) I am not a shy girl but i am introverted and always found it e...

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