All Comments on 'No Longer a Game Ch. 24'

Wow this sucked.

That is just common treatment from Lolthite drow

Hope that this helps Natalie to balance herself.

Great job so far. Live the adaption of the original series of books, and now it's all your flavor and style. Great job, please keep writing!

Did you write yoursrlf into a corner? Still waiting for the next chapter(s)!

ch 25 has been awaiting mod approval for a week now. Usually that only lasts for a day or so. (just edit the 24 to 25 in the url for this page to see).

I know you have said chapter 25 is in with the moderators, but is there anything that can be done to get them to hurry up their deliberations. Hoping Natalie and her friends manage to escape.

Chapter 25 was sent back several times and after four times editing it , it got approved so the next few chapters should be published soon. Thanks