All Comments on 'No Longer a Virgin'

Story had potential BUT - "before I could envelop her, she was gone. Falling to her knees as if in worship, she took my cock in her hand and began a soft, gentle, slow stroking ...."

For goodness sakes, the only woman that dissolves this quick usually has just stuffed the dollar bills in her purse. Next time, try some seduction, inject some real emotion. I only continued to read to see how much I could get annoyed by this story - pretty dam annoyed!

More background of their personalities and previous relationship. Merely aluding to the normal sibling antagonism doesn't quite set the scene for this sexual interlude.

I found the flowery language chosen to be quite enjoyable though. A nice change from the average crude wording.

My opinion anyway,

Kydreamer

well written - but no lead into or out of spoilt this story - but i did enjoy it

I couldn't agree more

Some warning next time would be great. granny sex is nasty. loser.

...seen some of these beautifully, sexy, grandmothers ranging in age from 50 to 65.