All Comments on 'No Longer BFFs'

a very good story

I guess tom has realized that you should be careful what you wish for, you just may get it, and even though I am not a fan of anyone being tied up, this was not bad, and if they gave awards for being stupid, then Tom would have won, pretty good story

Haha. I totally loved it.

Would like to see some more!

Great story part 2. Please

This story was actually lol but still hot

Tom is probably somewhere being a hater

First yes I'm a guy, now that we got that out of the way. Tom is a asshole( that's me being nice). This is one of the best story's I have read on this sight. I saw the listing in new story's and thought that sounds intriguing. So I opened the story up and wow was impressed by these two writers. It had me laughing and wishing I was there to watch Tom getting the humiliation he deserved. Sorry for being so long winded.

P.S. If there is any fact in this story I hope Tom lives a sad lonely life remembering what he could of had.

Very well done. Tom's a real dick and it was so great seeing him get his comeuppance. Part two, and I'm hoping there will be a part two, should pick right up where this ends. Thank you for sharing this.

Enjoyed this and some of your others I have read! Looking forward to hopefully reading more from you! Thanks for sharing!

And so very hot! Thank you!

Nice to see...... read... you back! This is another good one, however it needs an edit. Look through the text and improve some of your use of words, along with grammar.

Also, while this may anger your readers, try writing men as someone unable to please a lesbian-to-be, but not necessarily jerks. "All men are selfish jerks" can be funny, but gets old eventually.

Its too bad that you can criticize some peoples' work but are too ashamed to use your name or screen name. I think that sure there a few errors but its the story that counts.