All Comments on 'No Longer My Son...'

good story but it needs to be a little longer.

good story, nice twist at the end. Perhaps it could have been longer and the build up a little more drawn out. well done though as I am trying to put something together.

Left a cliffhanger so more should be on the way DO NOT let the public down!

NEEDS MORE

Oh yes! What a great understanding of what can happen I should know - been there, got Mom's T-shirt!). Like others have said PLEASE don't leave it there.

Good characters but we need more please

great story you should do more I like it alot

The sexual aspect of the story is erotic and kept my attention. But, I thought the back story was a bit weak. Nice story,tho.

its funny...

but it needs some more hot detail and sextual heat i guess

This is very similar to my own experience as a very young lad of 15.

...that lets this otherwise hot story down is the mother saying "don't call me Mum, call me Pauline". Since the whole point of the story is the incestuous relationship, surely when a son is shagging his mother he ought to call her wehat she is.

Was hot to me ,it got me hard reading it ,just wish I could do that with one special sister in-law .Humper

Circumcised or not. Does it really matter? I don't see any point in that description. It doesn't make any difference in any story, so why bother?

No happy ending for mom and son, dads old girlfriend shows up. BINGO

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