All Comments on 'No Monkey Business: Week 01'

Truly an excellent, absorbing journey - but I cannot help but feel somewhat a victim of coitus interruptus. More More!

Please please publish chapter 2.......

Dude! You so SO need to write more. This was great! I look forward to more of your work.

Loved how you put the whole week into the first chapter. Glad you started focusing more on how hot a fuck the mom was instead of how ugly her face was. Five stars.

I'm looking forward to week two. If Mom works from home why can't she do it 400 miles away in a college town? How long will it take for them to stop using two bedrooms?

can't wait for week 2!

Great build up. Simply awesome

You earned my 5 stars. Excellent story. Cannot wait to see more!

Holy smokes, that was one awesome story. I cannot wait for "week 2". Thanks!

This was great. I loved the build-up. I had a sexy dream last night cause of this. Need more!

Great story, best I've read on here for awhile.

I like how you kept it believable and reluctance from the mom.

Keep it up and describe her ass and asshole more in the next chapters ;)

-Spoiler-

"Oh," she said, groggily. "Be a darling and just cum inside me before you go to bed, okay?"

-Spoiler-

That was the most erotic sentence I ever read on this site.

Absolutely fantastic chapter offering a unique story not often seen on Literotica. Hope chapter two is ready soon.

I kept hoping her face would magically improve, by way of surgery or anything, but the momentum of it all kept me reading and not really mindin'.

A great first outing. At times it was hard to follow what was going on in the early sex scenes, the description seemingly contradicting the action. The build up is tantalizingly slow and kept me going. I like the counter-porn angle: ugly face, anti-cliche. Most of all, a reluctant mom is always preferable to a pornstar slut mom.

This thing is so off the wall it is bizarre! I like it, hope to see chapter two very soon.

That wold make a great short movie

Five stars for a super story that got better and more erotic as it went on; an extra star because you have a good command of language and write well; and a seventh star because you can spell - a task that seems to be too difficult for most of the contributors to this site.

Well done, and please hurry up with the second instalment.

Great first story! It kept me cumming back for more!

Thanks; I guess. This entry has lots of potential. Lots.

But from what I've just read HK, I don't you'd be the one do this near-excellent tale justice going forward.

Just hand over the sequels to NancDance instead. Near best writer on Literotica since, in my honest opinion, the passing of Alwayswantedto.

Now folks, negs away......

To find a story as good as this takes some doing. You gave both characters a great voice and I adored the humour and progressive sex scenes. I really didn't want it to end and think you are definitely the person to deliver more of the same. Thank you for the story and fun you brought me.

This was amazing, please keep up the good work. Can't wait for week 2!

....continue. You have talent

Awesome narration. Amongst the best Incest i have read. Can't wait for week 2

👍

Awesome story. Build up was fun!

When are you going to publish next chapter? You don't answer any of the comments we made.

Phenomenal writing. Can’t wait for the story to continue!

This was so good. It wasn't cliché and that started my interest but the way it was written was what kept my interest. 5 stars for sure.

WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE POST IT.

That was so good...cant wait for the next chapter... please make it soon...

Great writing! I hope I read much more of your work in the future.

I've read Literotica for years. Genre such as this (mom needs to conceive reluctantly receiving help from son) has been around, some very good.

Your story deserved a place among the top. It is full of anticipation, unpredictability, and visual imagination. Such works are hard to come by, and when it does, you will not regret reading thru 1-10 pages.

Looking forward to Week 2!!

By far the best stories I've heard. It was so interesting and unique! I could read this all day , been a busy person that I am it actually took me 4 days to complete this. I honestly love it

This story is amazing. It's so original. I have waited for a new chapter for weeks now. I really hope you can continue this.

YOU STORY IS VERY GOOD PLEAS POST NEXT PART SOON

That was so close to my mother and me.

We started out much the same way.

Except she didn’t want to get pregnant.

She so wanted to feel me cum in her.

I did so many times.

I have been reading incest stories on literotica for years now. I have read hundreds of them. Your story was simply the best one I ever read. For God's Sake keep writing and publishing here. I never felt the need to comment on any story before. But each week I check to see if you did more

Hi could you please let us know if we can expect more on this. I have been checking twice every week with hope

Thanks

I've been checking back every now and then to see if the next chapter is available. I loved this story and really hope you decide to continue it. I hope you are well and thank you for your brilliant story.

Next part pls..

Really Awesome Henryking! I hope there is more to cum!

Really hoping for another chapter or 2. Really great read

One of the best I ever read...

This is an awesome story ... I love how you built the story and the tension, and how barriers fall one by one. An excellent, one handed read!

A well thought out story which needs a follow up or ten!

will we ever see a conclusion? please

Awesome story. Read it many, many times. Does anybody know a similar?

It has been a fantastic story till now...We r waiting for the next chapters author...Please reply till when they will be out

great story but spoiled by stupid panties. TOO BAD !!!

excellent story

Great story. I love the details of the progression of their relationship. I’m left wondering if Mom had the agenda all along.

I hv been using literotica for some years, usually when i see more than 4 pages, i skip the story. But something got me hooked.. and damn it.. this is the best fucking story i have ever read. Mind blown. Simple fabulous.... the build up.. the end... perfect. Can wait for next one

Anymore? Need to know when she is impregnated by her son and that her fucks her senseless despite the 5 thrust rule and just fucks her and I hope he impregnates her again in the future, she's a good mom.

The start really threw me off, It wasn't bad it just sets you up for somewhat of a disappointment and then the story goes on to really flesh itself out. The progression was great and the only thing I can suggest is that the frustration events should come earlier in the story rather than later to help build tension between the two characters. Overall it was a great story, unique and one of a kind.

Such a great story, hope you come back and write some more!

god release the 2nd week already

Great story.

It had everything...it made me laugh, it made me cry, it made me horny as hell.

I'm with the rest of the readers, you should write more (not just for us, but because you have skill).

We need a fight before going to school, a cooling off period, a Thanksgiving visit, and everything in between.

Thanks

Great writing well done

I thought this was way hot. I love stories that slowly build up to things as long as events happen at a reasonable pace. I have tried to read stories were the author took 5 pages to describe on single flower and it had nothing to do with the story. This story was well thought out and progressed rather well, not too slow or not too fast.

I love to see a sequel. Perhaps, No Monkey Business: Week 02 To Hell With The Rules.

John

I enjoyed this unusual incest story. I liked the slow start and the gradual build up. Character development was good. I liked the fact that the mother was not drop dead beautiful. Regardless of now the mother's face looked, hopefully the son will realize all that the mother has done for him since birth.

What a Gem. Did not expect much but was blown away. Great pacing and very erotic. You have a gift. Look forward to all your works.

Great read. Characters were great. Story well written. Was funny in parts which made it a great erotic story. Best story I have read in a long time. Will def look out for other stories. Also As someone else has stated it was nice to read that he was not hung like a horse or she was a ex model well done.

Don’t really like the “novel” length submissions, but you kept me enthralled with the snippets of outlandish (😁) scenes. Only on rating from - 5* that would’ve been more, but…

Would rate 5 if the story continues.

Be a man. Put it in, thrust with abandon, make her cry for more. You're too obedient and wimpy. Jackin' off instead of ballin', hmmmpf. If I had done my mom, she would have been my woman forever. WTF ??

Great story. I just don’t like how the son sounds too wimpy, or maybe stupid, to just move the panties to the side and fuck the hell outta his mom

This was funny, smart, free of typos, free of worn-out tropes, fucking hot, and works a lot better than most stuff on here.

Hi HenryKing. I'm sorry to say that this story has been pirated and is for sale on Amazon from an 'author' John Xie. A reader kindly let me know one of my stories was being sold by this person (turned out two of my three stories were being sold by him) I got Amazon to take them down by reporting the copyright violation to them.

Here is the link to your story so you can do the same

https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0B5MZ89NF?ref_=dbs_m_mng_rwt_calw_tkin_14&storeType=ebooks&qid=1656958002&sr=1-6&asin=B0B5MZ89NF&revisionId=&format=4&depth=1

Wow, what a great story! You are an excellent writer. You seem to have some real, fully developed talent. Please write more!

Ridiculous story. Stopped reading by half way through. Too much focus again & again describing mom's ugliness, that was such a turn off. And the sex part - again much description was spent mechanically describing the sex acts rather than building some intimacy and emotions.