All Comments on 'No More Excuses'

i read up to where she showed steve her cheating cunt .. then i read last paragraph of the story .. and it nothing more then another cheating slut

Morality judgements are not mine to make. In terms of your writing…this story indicates that you might want to consider enlisting the assistance of an editor/proofreader. Your story line is ok…but since it's been done in many forms and fashions previously, you could have added some twists to individualize YOUR rendition. Alas, no such luck, resulting in shallow characters, dull plot and perfunctory sex. But, thanks for your effort! ***

I really love this story. I can feel and see myself there. The writing is pretty much on target with what would really happen, almost as if the author was there taking notes. All I can say is a rousing 'Great Job'. Your writing skills are excellent. 5 stars. Xoxoxoxo Annette

Thanks Jess, lovely story and very nicely written. The theme stikes a cord with me too, well done.

Next time Jack will wake up and,all he'll start swinging and divorce will happen. She better be careful it won't be pretty.

She should have straddled Jack's face and fucked his mouth