by martin_x59
so upset it was so short!
Thanks for updating, im eagerly awaiting more of this story! :)
I guess I don't get how he could be so in love with Tommy and fuck the other kid. I mean, can't you wait till you get home? Tommy didn't run around fucking other men and he thought Ryan was dead. Anyway, I am hoping that once he's rich he'll give to that family. I'm sure he will. What a horrible story about their dad. I'm sure that happened many times over during the war. I hope we see Tommy/Ryan in present day soon. I want to see more of them, but then again, it is so depressing that Ryan is dying. I really want to know why he didn't find Tommy later on and see how he was and find out he didn't get married. So sad :( Keep writing!!
sad to see it was so short!
Please post another
This story is so sweet and heart warming.
One final chapter would be great to bring all the threads of this amazing set of narratives to a conclusion. Perhaps back to the present. I really enjoyed this story, the twists in the plot and each persons story.
Thanks.
Please Martin would you conclude this story ? It just cannot end like this !
This is a BRILLIANT STORY - you had me tearing up for most of it but I totally loved each character and its individual story - really amazing !!
I have loved all your stories - please keep writing. AND PLEASE DO FINISH THIS ONE !!
BTW - What happened to fucking Bobby Jones ??? I hope somebody wrung his neck!