All Comments on 'No Reserve'

The story could have been developed more in the beginning. The oral sex scene was great. But I was pretty disappointed by the ending.

Other than that though, I like how the sassy broad let her hair down because the man wanted it down. It's so like real life.

You have in one part of the chapter that shows her to read a disk that says vampiros lesbos but theres`s nothing stayting she has any lesbians in it how come?

but the ending pisses me off. That's so crappy for Rhonda, to go through all that and to still lose to her ex. I know the feeling....

Very interesting and erotic story with a surprise ending. What happened to the DVD???

Nice writing!

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Even though it sucked in the, I liked the leading up to. I hope there is a part 2 where she gets revenge on Sam.

Okay, the story was good and then the end killed it. I hope you make a sequel or something where he pays for his bloody sins against Rhonda, the bastard! Maybe she meets him again when he's talking to her hubby, and kicks his tush! Anyhoo, definitely should be continued.

Unlike some, I loved the ending. COLD BLOODED!!

Why must almost every story have to end up with a compromise where the women has no choice but to give up the goods (pussy) to the man?!?! That part kinda pissed me off. Ne hoo it was ok, the ending was a bit *side eye*.

wow good story n interesting ending

Wow, what a twist! And a good one at that! Should've known it was too good to be true!

This was a well written story, I was very surprised to see the ending. I believe that many of us were blown away with this turn of events. Continue this or add them to another story???

I liked this. It was yummy. Although you are a bit wordy. Please cut it down in the future.

I think your story was very good, and too me it was not too wordy. I just don't like the fact my girl was used by 2men.........but I gave you 5 stars for the story and not how I felt about the men! I am not a man basher! Just don't like characters being taken advantage of.

Omgosh I knew he was somehow tied to her ex... oooh I'd kick him in the balls

Wow ! I am too through with both of them....she thought she would get her husband back but in the end he got her first! Oh well!