All Comments on 'No Room at the Cabana Ch. 03'

by TexRiffraff

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ItsADryHeatItsADryHeatalmost 7 years ago
Changing Narrator

I read all 3 chapters in this story, really enjoyed it. I think your use of the multiple character narrative device made the story move along well and gave it an interesting pacing. Cheers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
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what happens now? do Holly and Shannon share a moment, do the foursome become more than holiday fuckbuddies? Do they further expand to have other guys?

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