by TexRiffraff
Tex, ignore the haters, I loved the writing style. It helped me enjoy the story knowing what each character thought at all times. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I understand that this is your writing style, and I fully support your decision, and right, to use any style you feel gets your ideas out to the public.
That being said, your style difficult for *me* to follow, and takes my head out of the story and out of 'the sexy place'.
See, I ain't hatin', it just isn't for me. Keep up the good work!
~P
this POV-switching you do, but it works for the story. I do wish the switches weren't quite so quick, that we had more time with one before the switch, but that's a personal preference.