All Comments on 'No Strings Ch. 04: In the Office'

Good story that was well done. Sex scene was clearly written and complete. The receptionist was nicely introduced. She can be used later or merely be in this chapter.

Only problem was " as England was awakening". England is 5 hrs ahead of NY. At noon, NY time, England's office work day is ending, not beginning.

Good spot! It’s not NY but it is supposed to be in the US, so an error.