All Comments on 'No Thanks Ch. 01'

Some grammatical errors that reading aloud or an editor would catch. Not bad for an inaugural project

Im excited to read this series . Well written keep up the good work

Love the beginning... Great start .plz continue. ..I'd enjoy more details...an plz alittle longer..

Looking very forward too Ch.2... hugs&kisses

I like!!

For an inaugural project, the writing is quite good. But my problem with Warewolf stories is that there are too many of them and they tend to be highly repetitive and predictable. So I am a bit sceptical. Hope you are able to bring something new and exciting to this genre.

I really liked what I read so far. Intererting twist on the were stories that are usually written. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Greensboro NC?? Wow, never really a book so close to home! Keep it up!

Keep it up

Such a different start to a story. Really keen to know what hapoens! Pkease keep writing!!

Really grateful for the feedback so far!. I am working on chapter two right now and I am looking for an editor!. If you are one, please let me know, I have tried the volunteer editors page but no replies back at all.

I look forward to the next chapter, have you found an editor?

@anon Not yet, I've been trying!

Great start especially for a first story. I assume Arnold isn't their mate or his wolf would know. I hope he finds his mate. I'd like to know more about him. Why did he move do often? Did he actually ever experience pack life or does he just assume he'll hate it?

I like it so far. Good start. Looking forward for next chapter. Hopefully we don't get to wait for to long? ☺

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Chapter 2 has been submitted! Will hopefully be up soon. xxx

A promising and refreshing story. Glad I found it.