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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
hot and wet,

well done a tale every one can enjoy all men dream of such a beautiful encounter don't stop; now expand the story! keep on trucking tenbears43

bonnietaylor2bonnietaylor2about 8 years ago
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Annony was born in a load of crap and VD!!

grabmyballsgrabmyballsabout 8 years ago
I like your people

I'd enjoy reading more because of your appealing characters. The only surprise to me is that he actually charged her money. Oh well, maybe that happens.

i_wouldi_wouldabout 8 years agoAuthor

@grabmyballs

He told he'd charge her at first, before she made a pass on him (effectively renting out his own room - as normal hotel business) but in the end it was her own initiative to pay. He never asked for money, he didn't even want her to leave that early.

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