by Britease
What more needs to be said? Well done in a short, humorous way.
Spelling Spelling Spelling the mainstay of the language.
Yes I know you Think you 'Spellchecked' it, but you did not uncheck the "ignore words in UPPERCASE" option. So all the mis-spellings slipped through.
Supplyers, Accomodation, Emergancy, Indefinate. Maybe more.
Which begs the Question :- Given that there were approximately ten words (in Uppercase), of which at least four were mis-spelled, What is going on? Is this an indication of general spelling ability?
Yours, Kilroy
I hope that all my colleagues recognize that this is not reality, but it is fun!
but I have really enjoyed the others in this series. As soon as I can set aside the time, I will be reading more of your work.
like your story, but i really hate the dumb comments from all the english teachers
...morbid but funny. Don't know if it is just me or the story really is funny.
I never understand the don't quit your dayjob comment. Meant as an insult? Most writers here won't quit their dayjobs. I don't think so anyway. They are writing here free of charge. Both for our entertainment and their own. Personally i like Britease's other stories better but i can appreciate his efforts and the thought behind this tale, even the humour.
day job. FUCK YOU AND THE WHORE YOU RODE IN ON..YOUR MOTHER?
Brit tease doesn't let husbands wimp out and in thes case he let the nsonofabtch preditor get what was comming to him. Cheaters and preditors I have no use for.marriedwithballs@yahoo.com
they did it, and ended right where they belonged. It gives new meaning to the words: go to hell
I liked this line the best:
"I can't believe it ___ It's not possible _____ Victoria's secrets got it right!"
are a husbands worst nightmare, I haven't read one of your stories where the husband can fight. They are all these wimpy cuckold assholes. 5 star work still
But a little disappointed that he 'through' the husband out, rather than threw him. Anyway, don't you know that hell is really the Emirates Stadium where all the trophies are being assessed by the antiques roadshow?
That is where all cheaters wind up in the end.
Fuck 'um
HA HA HA HA HA
This story ran the gamut and showed the evolution a betrayed person can indulge. People infuriated by betrayal are capable of real raw emotion.
It ALSO might NOT be what happens to adulterers (and adulteresses!). Maybe there is a Special GloryHole area in Limbo for those who enjoy extramarital pleasure! First one there, please text back and let us know which way it goes (and cums!)
A nice diversion. Clever and cute.
Be careful what flavor of cuckold you choose to trifle with.
Your ability to bring humor into LW is greatly appreciated.
Thank you for writing and 5 stars.
turns out to be a form of brainwashing, TK U MLJ LV NV
Actually, pretty well done; an as they will be... well done.
I hope they all go to Club Inferno, and meet their true selves there.
Your stories normally glorify, or at the very least rationalize Cheaters.
Good short story! Moral of the story....run like your life depends on it when a pissed off husband catches you with his wife.
Good tongue and cheek story.
What is a round of ammo now? Standard .38 or .40 cal. About .38 cents a round.
And they say you can’t really get any thing worthwhile for under a buck.