by Victoriajohn
Congratulations on a story set in a very original and exciting era and setting. I hope to see more of your work!
Very good! I'm glad you didn't go into GREAT detail about the "looks" of the main character, but left that to my imagination. And so many sexual encounters, and you continued to keep it interesting! Thanks! Will be looking forward to "part two".
omg...that was very hotttttttttttt ...but then again your stories are all hotttttttttt (giggles) cant wait for more
patti
thanks for another great story. it's been a while since your last. can we have more please.
You had my temperature boiling!!! Please continue on with this story. Make a part two. SOMETHING!!! I need more of your work. Its phenomenal, please.... More?
Well written and totally plausable ,hell a bunch of us guys regularly used a Girl nicknamed "The Bike" and her big mate known as "Fat One"....They took 12 at a time.. *Memories of The Long Hot Summer of 1966* in Adelaide..
One of the hottest stories on this site. Please make No woman's land pt.2!
I have read this story many, many times, and it still excites me every time. Thank you for such a wonderful piece of writing ;)
remember that there were no Clint Eastwood films out yet in 1955. Still, as I said, great story otherwise.
Sorry I am not from England, but from the US. I started your series this morning and I kept coming back to it all day. I went to the grocery store wondering what would happen. Picked the kids up from school, rushed back to read. Just finshed dinner and the series. I loved it and I don't understand why you don't think you are a writer because I felt (English major) it was very well written. You built wonderful characters and a fabulous plot. Keep writing, can't wait to read more!
I first read this story on a different site and loved it. on this site it seems like theres more. you've done a great job with this and Id love a part 2.
This is going up there on my list of favorite stories. It's well written, highly descriptive and smutty from the get-go. I could actually visualize the scenes happening fairly easily. Absolutely fabulous.
This story is great, I would actually like to see her work in the brothel,(for a little bit, at least until she is able to escape or make a deal to get out or something). Please do not end this here!
Why were the kids in this story. It would have been good if they weren't in it. That crossed the line.
this story is the sexiest story I have come across, and gives the reader a strong picture of it happening.
Well done my wife is now going to please me.
well written i was hooked . i would love to see my wife used like this
WHat a story teller. Pace, dialog, clarity, imagination. Please keep writing.
What an excellent well told story. I was introduced to this article by another author of LITE who said they were inspired by this story to tell their own version, they tried but failed to meet you standard. THANK YOU VERY MUCH.
I seldom give a ' 5 ' but your story definitely deserved it. That was a fantastic story which I fully appreciated and your knowledge of the Australia Outback is very through .
Und sehr gut geschrieben das es Google super รผbersetzt hat .
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