All Comments on 'Noah's Starship Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Absolutely Amazing!!!

EMRI... you have done it again.... I know we discussed this privately. .. but.. this story is just Fantastic. ... plz keep writing an keep your stories coming...

Hope school is going well... miss u lots... hugs&kisses Jacquelynn

oneoflifesjewelsoneoflifesjewelsabout 8 years ago
Loving your story!

I love all of your stories; please keep writing.

chesthairslavechesthairslaveabout 8 years ago
Much improved beginning

from the Emerson and the Lincoln stories. Readers enjoy the courtship stage of romance. You allowed Navid a gentlemanly pace to woo Noah. Please continue. You last commented on your Lincoln story that you thought readers were tired of the series. I disagree. The releases of both stories overlapped. Many of the characters were the same but the timelines were different. Confusion reigned.

UBERtoesUBERtoesabout 8 years ago
The best yet

Love, love, love it, Emri.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I'm Hooked

Another great start to a wonderful series. I'm looking forward to finding out how Lincoln's story ends, but I'm absolutely loving the story between Noah and Navid. Your stories are so hot. Keep them coming. Thanks for sharing.

Lucinda

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Love your stories

I love the brushing of hair on Navid's muscular chest, and how Noah loves to rest his head and check against that soft hair!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wow

I just started this story today and it is amazing!!!!! I can't wait to read what happens next.

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