All Comments on 'Noah's Starship Ch. 14'

by tarzanacide

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Loved it especially navids point of view I'm so happy he realises how much he loves Noah,keep it up can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

This was perfect. Absolutely perfect. I smiled all day after reading. These two are truly blessed to have each other.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Navid's Perspective was perfect!

Love this story and really enjoyed clarification that I got from Navid's expressing himself verbally. His action were pretty clear communicators in past chapters, but hearing his internal dialog is really enjoyable.

I love both Noah and Navid and wish them all the joys possible in life. You write beautifully about a beautiful, loving relationship, a story which enriches my life and touches my heart. Thank You !

Ab

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I love Navid's pov

I come here just to read ur stories.......was so happy wen i saw de chapter today......thank you.....i want de link to the other story you talked about or better still please post it here......i just love ur writing. .....

tarzanacidetarzanacideover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you :)

Thanks everyone. I had no idea how people would react to hearing Navid's side since people seem to have very strong feelings that he is either toxic or angelic :).

The other story is Cage Cock Cairo on nifty. You can google it.

RainbowOceanRainbowOceanover 7 years ago
YOU KILLED IT 👌🏻

Am glad you wrote about Navids side of the story. I love the bound between these two and it makes me so happy having to read this story.. Thanks for updating and keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
i miss my favourite characters

Hope everything is fine......i miss my boys.....pls update soon

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