by AddictedWombat
I hope you plan on continuing this story. I would love to read how they reach the culmination of their shared love and desire and how they priceed into the future.
but disappointed about where it ended. I would have suggested writing more before posting, but hopefully you won't keep readers who have marked your page waiting very long.
Jake's sister is really horny and needs some male stimulation for sure. If she makes out with Jake; maybe he'll eat her and/or do her really well to ease her pain ?? I think in another chapter, they would once getting past brother and sister, really get it on well and enjoy it. She has a killer body and hopefully, he is big enough to satisfy her too. Cannot wait for me. Thank you.
Great start although we agree it ended a little quick. Yet it leaves us wanting more. It's a good way to introduce the players. Waiting. Waiting. Please hurry.
TBC
You could end the story here and let my imagination wander where it will, but a sequel would be welcome. Good dialogue and pace. Thanks.