All Comments on 'Nobody's Beauty But Mine'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Well Done!!!

excellent story... enjoyed it heaps...

cupcakesparkycupcakesparkyover 10 years ago
More please

Zack needs to be there when Marybeth's explains the scenario... And I'd like to hear more about how this thesis came about.

fanfarefanfareover 9 years ago
Funny!

This little quickie really hits the funny bone! Right up to the very twisty(tasty?) ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Lovely story.

If maybe a little too textbook :-))

Liked it a lot when Barbie gave G-guy a chance to redeem himself with her pretended envy at her neighbor, and he so totally missed it.

But Mary-Beth dropping the pretend voice, what was that about? I dont get it at all

Hang in there, you are good :-)

VvV

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