All Comments on 'Noctilucence'

As carefully written as this submission is, don't you think that it wants a bit more? I do believe it needs some information, if not more sexual detail, more facts about for whom or why this situation is occurring. Read the piece carefully. Except for the seeming physical situation (one person above, the other below, the in and out movement) there is no real way to be sure even if the sex is between a man and a woman, two women or two men. Are the pair here for a renewal, a making up, a clandestine affair? For a reader to react or care about the situation, the reader needs at least the barest information about the people in the story.