All Comments on 'North Star Ch. 03'

Please don’t wait another 3 years for the next chapter!

Your already solid writing is really next-level in this chapter - you've certainly improved your craft in your time away.

You've also set up a fascinating dilemma for our hero and the antagonist has shifted from the relatively non-threatening girlfriend to (presumably) Noah's father and who knows at this boarding school. There's a lot of potential for conflict, tough choices and heartbreak in that set-up.

I'm definitely looking forward to reading more!

My heart hurts and my head reels that this story ends here. Such a magnificent work. Bravo, Author, Bravo!

This story should not end here! There are so many loose end that makes you want to cheer for Ryan and Noah, their friendship and what could be. Best chapter yet!

Please finish this story. Your writing is sophisticated which on this site is rare and I'd really like to see how this turns out!

This twist ruins the story imo. It gives all the power to hateful characters like Jill, the admin at the school, and Noah’s dad. And it punishes the best character in the story, Noah. And Ryan is still very inlikeable - he nearly let that monster Jill seduce him. What a puss! I hope for additional chapters to see some kind of redemption for Ryan and HEA for Noah.

I'm sad that bad characters didn't get what they deserve, but i still think it's a great story and very well written.

Please finish this story