All Comments on 'North Star'

Dude this is amazingly.......just....awesome!!!!!

I was expecting more but I guess, some stories don't need to state the obvious. Great details/description..liked Ryan and Noah's characters.

Looking forward to what you write next!

Please continue this story

Do you ever have an original thought in your so called brain? Enough with criticizing

9 out 10 stories as crap. Since you know so much try writing stories yourself. Till then shut up.

As for the story it's good. I would enjoy a continuation to learn if they do follow their feelings come daylight.

Love the story and love the hair on Ryan's chest

Get past half way down page 1. You really need an editor. Grammar, run on sentences and lack of punctuation where it was needed stopped me reading further.

More, please! I loved the build up, and how these two horny jocks finally made it with each other! I hope you're planning on continuing the story. Well done., it got me very hard.

Hope you continue this story. Off to a good start. The negative comment is just pure BS.

For your first story on this site I think it's a strong start. Some grammar mistakes but still completely readable. I would like to see this fleshed out as a complete story.

Also, negative comments are part and parcel of the Internet so I hope you don't get too down on yourself for it. Take everything with a grain of salt and know that there is always room for improvement. Haters gonna hate but whatever.

I really admire your writing style.

Nice, loved the build up and the boys getting together. AAA+

If you're lucky enough to have found this tale, read on. It's incredibly good.

This was great until it wasn't finished. What a waste.