All Comments on 'Norwegian Family'

Nice story.... but you've never actually been to Norway, I take it? Nobody spells Erikson like that here, I can assure you -- never heard of a Norwegian girl by the name of Anya either, but it could happen. Eriksen with an e (not "Erik-son") however is a common name -- but definitely no-one with double k's or a c before the k.

Take it from a native ;-)

So, the country and the spelling may be wrong.... it's still a hot little story.

Lukas

keep going

I love the setting-green hills and valleys in rural Norway and can imagine not much to do after dark-especially for three men and a horny 18 yo girl.

The premise was good 2 brothers & Dad alone with 18 yo daughter. In the end descriptions fairly tame and not stimulating.

It needed to be either 'first time' and/or 'younger' and/or 'non-censentual' to have added some interest.

This story got me very aroused. I love reading incest stories and it turned me on to think about a woman having sex with both her brothers and then her father. However, I wish you had spent more time describing the sex scenes. The description of Anya's having sex with Hans was all too short, and the scene with Lars wasn't too much more detailed either. Please expand on these types of scenes in future stories. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. You are a good writer with a lot of potential.

The story was great, but please give us more detail on the fucking. Stretch it out so we can feel we are actually there seeing the 18-year-old girl being fucked by her brothers and father. Better yet, so we can fantasize being them fucking her. Having them ejaculate inside her was a very good touch. More detail, please.

A good story,even better first comment,yes I have been to Norway a lot,I am German.