All Comments on 'Nostalgic Ramblings'

Lothario, you truly are the greatest. I love the way you did these ramblings, allowing us to see inside your head.

I love the way you describe the taste of pussy, by the way.

I am eager to read ch 04, but it has now been so long since I read ch 03 I had to go back to that hotel room in Chicago and enjoy their making love one more time.

Have you considered an old time, traditional, happy ending for this story? You know, as in...they go back home and "go steady", finish high school, go to college, get engaged, get married and live happily ever after.

Now that was one well written narrative. You really have a gift at telling stories. Thank you.

This guy writes like a complete moron. Even in print, he is constantly looking in the mirror to admire himself. He wants to sound like a great lover when he's really the kind who keeps a picture of his right hand in his wallet. Lothario is really pitiful

...although the bra size was probably 34B; I've never heard of a 24B. I'm somewhat of a nitpicker, and I found a few other piddly errors. Otherwise, you write well; the style was very conversational and natural. You held my attention with your delicate balance of reverence and cynicism. Keep writing.

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)

Let's just concede for a moment that I'm a pitiful loser who fantasizes all day about the women I'm not enjoying. You're still a pussy. Now, if you'll excuse me, I was having a nice conversation with your mother until you interrupted, and she'd probably like me to take my dick out of her mouth now.

And Lalenya Love, you're right, it was 34B, not 24B. I don't find malnurishment sexy.

I read this and feel as though I am a voyuer peeking into your head. I find this to be an incredible feeling and positively addicting, and now I am left hoping that this won't be my last 'fix'.

Wow, you are now by far my favorite author in Literotica. Your stores always suck me into them and I love every bit of it. I hope you keep on writing and put together more incredible stories.

PS- Ignore the jackasses out there, places such as Literotica brings in many types of people, most of them bad. ;)

being a brit, we are often too quick to be cynical and pessimistic, but i'm always shocked to find how rude and unconstructive american criticisms can be. i think your stories are brilliantly written and thought out, admittedly there are typing errors but for christs' sake - we should all grow up and move past them.

thank you for keeping me entertained...and please don't end the chicago hotel series happily, it's all just too cheesy if you do.

Best ramblings I've ever heard (and hottest). Very nice indeed, as your stories always seem to be. Hmm...chapter 4, not here yet but I'm sure we'll all love it. You really have a great talent ;)

Wow, that was fabulous. Possibly my favorite Literotica submission of all time, and that's saying something. I usually like the hardcore, nasty shit, but this touched me. . . And made me cum like a madwoman. It reminded me of an amazingly similar experience I had at the end of high school. Maybe that's what made it so great - it was realistic, so realistic that I could actually relate. As much as I love your other stories, I urge you to write more like this one.

Very very original. By far "true" story in every sense of the word. And believe me, I enjoyed the literary skill here the most!

Simply great. Your stories, memories, hell even wanderings are wonderful. Artfully written and skillfully played out in my mind as my eyes flutter over the words that I can only assume pour out as fast as I read them.

Thanks, thanks for writing the memory out, and thanks for the update on Chicago, one of my favorite stories.

I can really feel it with you. It is so well written and I can remember different times that I was on the beach at Matsushima, Japan with my little Japanese girl for the weekend. The time giving the massage to Swedish skier on the tram at Innsbruck. I should write of my adventures in Japan, Europe and USA.

The Chicago Hotel story special. My 33 yr old Irish virgin followed me there for a meeting I had. She was a red head and I've heard that they feel all emotions more intensely than the rest of women. I believe that was true for her.

loved the story the meandering pilosophy and writting were brilliant