All Comments on 'Not a Beautiful Woman Ch. 02'

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technowhimseytechnowhimseyabout 6 years agoAuthor
Need constructive criticism

I like writing but it's hard and laborious. I want to do the best that I can to give people stories that they enjoy. So, please, if you have the time and inclination, say what you liked about it and what you didn't so that I can improve. So long as you're polite, I will be grateful. Thanks.

NrsGoodBodyNrsGoodBodyabout 6 years ago
Oh my

I can't even begin with how salacious this is.. Pease write more. You have become one of my favorites 💙

JudyLeeJudyLeeabout 6 years ago
You asked what I didn't like.

You write a good story. My only problem was when she cleaned his cock after fucking her ass. That is nasty. There are always germs and she could get really sick. Maybe if she had an enema first?

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