All Comments on 'Not a Good Day'

Thank you for this most enjoyable and well-written tale; it pushed every one of the right buttons. Well done - five stars.

DON'T QUIT YOUR DAY JOB. This was poorly plotted and poorly written. Your descriptions were flat, your use of language was trite and your plot was jerky and unbelievable. Maybe you need this kind of punishment to improve your writing or to convince you to stop.

good to see familiar names. next time take the games out to peka peka beach.

Can anyone direct us to where this can be found ?

Does it work if you have a contract with the Bank Manager giving you permission

to rob his bank ?

Well, well, punished for something he didn’t do. Sounds like typical female fairness. Why do these pathetic little men put up with this sort of thing. Just get a baseball bat, get the key and throw the hitch out, naked, in the rain. See whether she cries about fairness ?