All Comments on 'Not a Man Ch. 03'

Please keep this wonderful story going!

You kind of tapered off there. Not that there is anything wrong with that. But you cant just end it like that. Keep going, a climatic finish is in order here

Please keep writing

last 3 lines are great. think Sarah at the clothing store might be a life long keeper. LOL

Jay and Tess are both cruel individuals. Simple as that. To then try to get the readers to sympathize with her through her mom being sick is silly. She didn't seem to give a single fuck about Henrys feelings, so why the fuck should he care about her feelings? Guess it wouldn't fit the narrative progression if he actually told her off tho. Shame. Really liked the last chapter with the deep dive of Henrys deep deppresion over Jays treatment, and Tess' reaction to it all.

3/5.