All Comments on 'Not a Man Ch. 04'

This really got my attention and held it. You are telling a very erotic story and doing it very well. I can't wait for the next chapters!

I certainly am looking forward to seeing the next chapter(s). For one, the story is a turn-on -- very well told -- but even if it changed and became a turn-off (which could only happen if something totally out of character, such as scat or serious, mean BDSM, should happen), I still need to know what role Vee is going to play. I guess (and hope) it will be something to make me real horny!

A really enjoyable story. I can't wait for the next instalment and to see how Henry's relationship with Vee developed.

Thank you.

Such pleasurable reading. Thank you so much for sharing your talented story telling. So many questions. What name will Henry choose for himself? What will that bitch of a boss Darla be up to next? Will Henry ever find true happiness with someone who cares for him? Maybe Vee or the mature clothing store owner? Looking forward to reading your chapter!

Certainly one of the best stories, if not THE BEST, i v red. Too bad the next one does not seem to b due soon :(

So not 1 time does he she get fucked not once ... you got tell page 4 not page 3 of 4 ...page 1 of 4 .. waste of fucking time period

Sometimes I don't enjoy the blackmail, but you've done it rather well, with a benevolent malevolence; like a gentleman robber style. It also helps that you've let Henry get confused and start to enjoy him/her self.

Honestly, one thing that makes erotica hotter for me is when authors let the readers into a character's inner experience, and you've done that verrrry well.

I confess that I am happy that you plan to extend this series, when time and inspiration permit. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

This whole saga really got me hooked. Well written and a great concept with alot of teasing for the reader. I learned alot and maybe will help my own stories.

But Henry never had sex any with Jay. No BJ, no anal just a semi hand job back in the beginning. A real letdown at the end when Tess and Jay left for the vacation. Alot of the comments are asking for another chapter (so would I) but given the dates that seems unlikely.

Please more chapters

I’d love your to come back to this someday

Great start but agree that the final two chapters were major letdowns