All Comments on 'Not Just a Boss Ch. 01'

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charlie48charlie48over 7 years ago
Good start

More please, very good start but longer chapters and soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Just a quick correction

It's IUD. A UTI is a urinary track infection

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More...

Oh my dear author please spend more time on the seduction and introduce the voyeur earlier on. Build the excitement to a fever pitch! This reader loves the image of a watcher with cock in hand...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Be Careful of terms

She said " I have a UTI" so he felt safe. A Urinary Tract Infection doesn't prevent pregnancy. AN IUD (Intrauterine device) does.

Yeah, I know I'm picky.

Otherwise good story.

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