All Comments on 'Not Just Friends Anymore'

Slow down. Take your time with the characters. Feel them AND what their feeling then write it all down (that's the hard part)

Not bad at all for a 1st try. Keep writing, and don't get discouraged. You show a great deal of promise as a budding author. *S*

I liked it a lot. It had feeling, not just the .. well, I'll leave the description alone, we all know what the formula stuff is ... thank you.

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