All Comments on 'Not My Type'

Good writing, nice buildup, and a perfect length. Really liked the characters and setting. Very well done.

A great story. I enjoyed your other submittal as well. Saying a lot with a few words is a definite asset when writing. Hope to read a lot more from you. .

I believe that may have been the hottest story I've read on here ;) So realistic, and loved the goth chick character.

Off to read more of your stuff!

Kitty.T

(ps: I came like 5 times... SO HOT!!!)

Let's just say if this happened to me...well I'd be the happiest girl in any part of this world.

Makes no sense but this was delicious to read 😍💦💦👅