All Comments on 'Nothing But a Toy'

by chemicalsiren

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
please write more!

I loved it...the weaving back and forth between 'too much' and 'not enough,' the conflict, the ache, the need, the completion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
once again, wow!

i so enjoy the way you write,what a gift girl. the wonderful details,paint a vivid picture in my mind.the rhythm of this story just builds up,until the explosive climax.good work siren. please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well fuck me

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