All Comments on 'Novak Might Like Me Ch. 02'

OK I sorta get the whole innocent teenager thing now. Strict christian parents= sexual repression and lack of understanding.

you went from innocent jason suddenly saything things like 'fuck stick' and 'deep throating'- it went from jason playing with it to get his treat to sex awfully fast- he lost all his innocence act in a matter of a day it seems. it was ok otherwise- i would read more- jason likes licking novak- in the shower jason will have access to novak's ass hole_ getting his little tongue deep in there- he couldn't get it in his brother's piss slit- so that might be more satisfying---once novak gets jason's virgin hole stretched- i can imagine jason wanting to bounce up and down on novak's cock while it's inside him- playing rodeo and novak is the stallion and jason is the cowboy. he should probably discover his own orgasm and the pleasure it brings during this- cause novak's fat cock head will be stimulating jason's prostrate- so jason can shoot off without his cock even being touched---hot

I really like this story, please keep it coming.

The Jason character sounds like a 4 year old kid, very off putting. Leave him his proper 18 years old but naive. Give him a nice thick 8” Dick and let Novak teach him how to use his hands, mouth, big Dick and ass.

Love the story. Captures the longing and excitement a young bro has for his older bro. Like how the older bro teases the younger. Excellent description of their sex together. Eager to read the next chapter.