All Comments on 'Nova's Journey'

I have found it very interesting and enthralling, a great story with good detail and a logical and natural sequence.

I do not usually read this style of tale, but in your work, very enjoyable and I will be looking out for more.

Please continue.

Thankyou.

This is easily one of the best stories I've found here.

so are the whores that spy or spies that whore?how does a girl with no interest in men try to seduce them?why would she want to be around the 1 person she can never have?

This story and the world you created have stayed in my mind - I'm hooked! Please continue.

Well written - I look forward to more.

Thank you.

OAT, I am looking forward to further postings of your Nova's Journey. You have terrific writing skills.

From a historians viewpoint, I understand that you need to hollywood historical fiction in order to be able to bond with your readers.

Several suggestions: Before refrigeration and safe dairy products, women's breasts were at best a very secondary sexual object. Girls almost always were topless and it was never unusual to see adult women topless in any culture. The babies gotta be fed!

Economics for women was based on their labor. Wearing a number of petticoats, or embroidery work or ribbons and lace. These were the female equivalent to bank accounts and ready cash.

Polygamy made the work load less for each wife as well as the burden of providing the husband with sex and babies.

Bearing children was often a death sentence for many girls and women. A considerate husband would take out his sexual demands on prostitutes to protect the wife he loves. Especially once he knows he has been infected with a venereal disease.

Polyandry was rare occurrence, almost always a warrior tribe with high ratio of male deaths due to unremitting tribal violence and the risks of hunting.. Outlier, extreme environments and many enemies.

This was fantastic! Keep writing with this story or anything else you're great!

I meant to click five stars! This was amazing and it left me wanting more! keep writing!

I appreciate each and every comment left here, as well as the ratings and favorites, I have just submitted the next part of the story, please look for it hopefully sometime this week, thanks again!

Amazing story- I'm supposed to be sleeping, but once I began reading this.. well, that went out the window. I felt entranced throughout the story, immersed in it. The flow of time is perfect. I really enjoyed this story- added you to my favorites. ^_^

Now I have to read the second part. Thanks for sharing your amazing gift. :]

I've given you five stars for the quality of your writing and the theme, which I take to be a fantasy tale. An interesting start. My one criticism is that some of the paragraphs are too long and could easily have been broken down into two or three paragraphs: long paragraphs are fine in print but not easy to read on a computer screen. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters.

This will most definitely test my endurance. Bold beginning. Please no penis interaction. It's such a game changer. YUCK EEW THAT'S NASTY

Hmm, I never tire of this story. It's a classic as far as I'm concerned. I love love love it

Mystical. Magical. Memorable. Oh, how I wish to touch (the) Skye.