All Comments on 'Now Serving Ch. 10'

Would you please consider a sequel to this superb story, perhaps splitting off a few characters to punish Justine some more.

Your story, I thought worked out well. Like daughter mother had to the same. As Matt well found out to his delight. Enjoyed your writing. Thanks for your talent, as we readers wish we too could hopefully do as well.

I love this story. Every part of it. I am only sorry that there isn't more to come. But I'll gladly read anything else you print.

Excellent story, each of the individual chapters in the series is great, but the series as a whole is exceptional, a true case of the whole being greater than the sum of its parts.