All Comments on 'Now Starring Ch. 02'

An awesome story so far and quite well written. I definitely hope to be hearing more from these two soon.

This is a fantastic piece I keep hoping for more, wishing u had done more than 2 pages. I am waiting impatiently for the next part, hopefully tomorrow lol. I love it!

Love the storyline and characters. It is very well written and I can't wait for the next installment.

Next? Good style. Nice storyline. Characters being developed with some insight. Romantic rather than rutting. Trust you are busy typing

very interesting!!! this story is wonderful...i'm really rooting for david and john to end up together! i don't trust phil...i think he's hating cause he may like david too...there is also something about john's boyfriend that bothers me...i can't place it but i don't trust him as far as i can throw him either....i can't wait to see how this plays out. i hope you are currently working on the next chapter(s)!

I only just caught up with this series today and I'm so glad I did. I love your characters, you paint them so vividly that I can almost see them in action. (especially in this chapter *yum*) The lovely tensions you've created work really well, particularly between John & Mollie and David & John himself but I like the complication of their existing relationships too. I'm very curious to see how it all pans out.

No one in this story is faithful. It makes it impossible to care for or root for any one or any couple. They claim to have feelings, but have no remorse about cheating on others, and the just disappear from each other for weeks. Nothing is real.